Tag: Fiction

  • The Girl with the Golden Smile – 4

    The Girl with the Golden Smile – 4

    Prompt:

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    The Girl with the Golden Smile – 4

    “You haven’t told me your name,” Nalia said.

    She trailed behind Nicholas, watching him survey the house. She supposed he was assessing his purchase. She tugged peeling paint from the wall in the corridor, and winced when white dust fell on the floor.

    “Nicholas.” He flashed a grin at her. “Nicholas Muchemi.”

    She nodded.

    “Nice to meet you,” she said.

    “So, Nalia,” Nicholas said walking down to the next room on the second floor. “What were you running from last night?”

    “Do you have to know?”

    “You said I was your lifesaver.  Of course I have to know.”

    Nicholas leaned on the doorjamb to what appeared to be a library. There were old books left on the shelf. Nalia entered the room, the books calling to her.

    “Lifesaver or not, I don’t know you well enough to tell you,” Nalia said, stopping by the bookshelves. She read the titles on the shelves with interest.

    “Do you like books?” Nicholas asked.

    “Some,” Nalia said touching the old spines. “The owner of these ones didn’t take care of them. Are you going to sellOld-Books them?”

    “Maybe,” Nicholas said coming to stand beside her. “I might have them restored and keep them as part of the house.”

    “How often do you do this sort of thing?” she asked, pulling out a geography encyclopedia from the shelf.

    “This is my third house.”

    Pride colored Nicholas’s words. Of course he would take pride in his achievement. She couldn’t imagine how much money it took to restore a house like this. She’d probably never see that kind of cash in her life. Returning the encyclopedia, she sighed and walked to the windows.

    “It must be nice,” she said, staring out at the overgrown flower gardens behind the house.

    “It’s a challenge. I like challenges,” Nicholas answered behind her. “You’re changing the subject, Nalia.”

    “I don’t want to talk about last night. Why are you making me wait for your friend?”

    “He’s a doctor.”

    Nalia turned to look at Nicholas. He walked along the bookshelf, reading the book titles like a connoisseur. He was tall, taller than Malik. Nicholas was lean where Malik was bulky. Nicholas moved with grace, a warm refined air clung to him. Nalia imagined it came from years of living in a world he’d mastered.

    She couldn’t imagine Malik browsing a bookshelf. Her husband preferred watching the news, and reading newspapers as though they held the secrets of the world. He thought novels were a waste of time, and he only wrote when he absolutely had to.

    “Nalia,” Nicholas broke into her thoughts.

    She blinked and stared at him.

    “What are you thinking about? You looked so far away. My friend just text me, he’s two minutes away. We should head downstairs.”

    Nalia frowned. “You said he was a doctor?”

    Nicholas chuckled.

    “Don’t worry, Eli is a real doctor. I saw him graduate and get his certification.”

    Nalia stared at him and then she laughed.

    The saga of a quack doctor had taken over the local news. A man who’d pretended to be a doctor and used his position to abuse women instead. She imagined doctors were having a hard time lately, having to prove they were real doctors.

    Nicholas had a sense of humor.

    She liked that.

    “I like your laugh,” Nicholas said studying her.

    His compliment shouldn’t have excited her, but it did. Warmth burst inside her, so vibrant, she forgot all the reasons why liking him was wrong. Heat suffused her cheeks and she dropped her gaze to the floor.

    “We should go,” he said then.

    She nodded and followed him out of the library.

    She imagined the folks living here before must have been grand to have a whole room designated as a library. All her books were stacked on a carton in her closet. She often had to fight with her clothes to get those books to sit well.

    Downstairs, anxiety hit when she heard the sound of another car. She slowed down, while Nicholas seemed to increase his footsteps, hurrying to the front door. She watched him open the door with a flourish.

    She stopped in the middle of the living room. Fear returned, and she realized how free she’d felt before, when it had just been her and Nicholas. This house had somehow given her solace from her life in the last twelve hours. Sitting at the kitchen table with Nicholas, prowling the house with him, laughing…she couldn’t remember the last time she’d felt so carefree.

    The sound of excited male voices outside reached her and she closed her eyes. She was scared again.  Nicholas returned followed by a short light-skinned man who carried a medical bag.

    “Eli, this is Nalia,” Nicholas said, leaving the front door open. “Nalia, this is my best friend, Eli. He’s a private doctor.”

    Nalia could only nod, her voice lost. She tried for a smile, but even that seemed stuck.

    “Nalia,” Eli said with a warm smile. “I hope Nicholas has been good to you?”

    She glanced at Nicholas and her traitorous heart skipped a beat.  Guilt set in. She was married. Yet here she was…tempted.

    Alas, it was true; there is no one in the world that lived without sin, was she to count her sins in the last day, she was sure to burn.

    Malik would be the one to burn her, she thought with a shiver.

    “Shall we find a private room?” Eli broke into her thoughts. “I’ll take a look at that bruise on your cheek, put ointment on it.”

    Nicholas pointed to a door to their right. She gave him a nervous smile and led the way to the door. It opened into a study. There was an old desk and a pair of chairs before it. She chose one and let out a shaky breath when Eli produced a stethoscope.

    She closed her eyes when he leaned down to study the bruise on her cheek.

    “Can I ask how you got this?” Eli asked.

    She’d heard the question asked many times before. Concerned friends, her mother, her neighbors…she always lied. She told them stories of falling, bumping into doors, cupboards, absurd lies…never the truth. Opening her eyes, she met a kind gaze, and suddenly she just couldn’t lie anymore. Tears filled her eyes and she found she couldn’t form the words, though she wanted to say them.

    “Did someone hit you?” Eli asked then, taking a seat.

    She nodded, making the tears slide down her cheeks.

    “Was it your husband?” Eli asked his gaze on her left hand.

    Nalia fought back the shame that welled inside her and took in a deep breath.

    “Yes,” she said, feeling as though she was jumping over a huddle. “My husband hit me.”

    ****

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  • EA Friday Feature – September Prompt #3

    EA Friday Feature – September Prompt #3

    EA Friday FeatureFriday Feature1

    Write a story of only 1,000 words using the prompt given.  Post it on your blog on Fridays and share posts from fellow bloggers participating in the feature.

    September Prompt #3:

    A Quote: There is, No One in the World, That Lives without Sin…

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    The Red Kanga

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  • EA Friday Feature – September Prompt #2

    EA Friday Feature – September Prompt #2

    Friday Feature1

    EA Friday Feature

    Write a story of only 1,000 words using the prompt given.  Post it on your blog on Fridays and share posts from fellow bloggers participating in the feature.

    Sept. Prompt #2:

    Mystic woods
    Once again we have a picture. The Mystic Woods! What story do you see here? The due date for this prompt is: September 11, 2015.
    Remember the prompt is simply a guideline…let your creative juices flow and your imagination go wild.
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  • EA Friday Feature – September Prompt #1

    The Prompt for September:

    Friday Feature1

    Write a story of only 1,000 words using the prompt given.  Post it on your blog on Fridays and share the posts of fellow bloggers participating in the feature.

    September Prompt #1

    Risk: What is your interpretation of Risk: A gamble on something

    Last Prompt Responses:
    Chocolate Cupcakes
  • The Girl with the Golden Smile – 3

    The Girl with the Golden Smile – 3

    Prompt #1Friday Feature1

    Risk: What is your interpretation of Risk: A gamble on something

    Life Outside the Box

    Nalia.

    Nicholas bit into the chocolate cupcake.

    She was a temptress, how had she known he liked chocolate? They tasted good, heavenly.  She passed him a mug of coffee and he stared at the steaming liquid.  She was a magician too.  He hadn’t done grocery shopping yesterday.

    “There’s a shop at the end of the road. I bought instant coffee there. I took money from your car.”

    She grinned.

    “I think it’s funny you have a jar of coins in your glove compartment.”

    Nalia seemed to have gone exploring while he slept. Changed her clothes too…or her blouse.  She wore a clean white t-shirt that read ‘Wishing for the stars’, and the blue jeans she’d worn yesterday. They had water marks. She’d tried to clean out the mud. Her braids fell around her face, hiding the bruise that had turned darker than it was last night.

    “I borrowed this too,” she said tugging on the t-shirt. She sat on the chair across him and leaned her elbows on thebreakfast table. “Found it in a closet on the second floor. Do you live here?”

    Nicholas sipped the coffee, it wasn’t the best, but it was hot and sweet. Three healthy sips and the sleep cobwebs dissipated.

    “No.” He looked around the kitchen. The previous owner had left a lot of things hanging around. “This is my first time here.”

    Waa,” Nalia’s eyes went wide. “You’re one of those people, aren’t you?”

    He didn’t like the tone she used, accusing…judging.

    “What people?” he asked.

    “You own a country house and an apartment, and a hut in the hills, and a bungalow by the beach.” Nalia counted his imaginary houses using her left hand, she shook her head. “No one lives in these houses but the rats and the stray cats. So, why own them?”

    Nicholas chuckled. “You have a wild imagination. Do I look rich enough to throw money away that way?”

    “So, are you a penny saver then?” she asked. “Ah…but the coins in a jar should answer that question. You know I noticed you don’t have proper furniture around here. There’s only that one mug you’re using, and I had to use a rolling pin to mix the cupcakes. Do you know how hard that is?”

    “No.” Nicholas sipped his coffee. “You talk a lot.”

    “It’s not my fault.” Nalia sighed and sat back in her seat. “I hang out with kids all day. When I meet adults, I get excited and try to use all my words.”

    Nicholas laughed then.

    She smiled.

    “Finally,” she said. “I was a bit worried you’re those people who frown all the time. I feel better now. I wanted to thank you when you’re smiling.”

    “Thank me?” Nicholas asked, reaching for another cupcake.

    “For being my life saver last night,” she said, her tone changing. “You took a risk taking in a strange woman in the night.”

    “You jumped out of nowhere,” Nicholas accused. “You could have been killed, what were you thinking?”

    “I don’t think I was.” Nalia rubbed her arms with a sigh. “I wasn’t in the best of places last night. You must have been shocked.”

    Nicholas studied her face. She had one of those slender faces. Clear dark brown eyes, and a ready smile. She was pretty, in a plain innocent way. The bruise on her left cheek bothered him.

    “Did you get that bruise running in the woods?”

    She reached up and touched it, her fingers trembling as they touched the tender skin.

    “I got it from a bad habit.” She sighed and got up. “I’m sorry to have bothered you. I’ll leave now.”

    “Wait,” Nicholas said surprising himself.

    She paused, giving him a frown.

    “I made you coffee and chocolate cupcakes. I don’t have money to pay you—

    “That’s not why I’m asking you to wait.” Nicholas waved her worry away. “Please, sit down for a minute. If you stay a bit, I’ll drive you home.”

    “No.” Nalia shook her head, the cheerful smile disappearing. “I—

    “Fine, I won’t drive you home,” he said, wanting that ready smile back. “I’ll take you to the bus stop.”

    “I don’t have money.”

    “I’ll lend you bus fare.”

    “How will I pay it back?”

    “You can pay me with Mpesa.”

    “I’m—

    “Hey, it’s a Saturday.” Nicholas sat back in his seat and folded his arms against his chest. “Everyone takes a break on Saturday morning.”

    “Yeah, not me,” Nalia clutched the back of her seat, looking out the window at the rising sun. “I need to get going. I did something last night.”

    “Something bad?” he asked, curious as to what would make a woman go running in the woods so late.

    “Something outside the box,” she said with a sigh. Her hands were shaking. She let go of the chair, and crossed her arms against her chest. “I know I look like I’m smiling right now, but…I’m a bit insane.”

    “Should I be worried?” Nicholas asked.

    Nalia stared at him and when he lifted a brow in question she burst out laughing.

    “You can’t possibly be afraid of me, can you?” she asked.

    “You said you’re insane,” Nicholas countered.

    Nalia studied him for a moment, and then nodded.

    “Yes, you’re right. I’m insane. I’ve gone crazy. You are the first poor soul I ran into after my descent into this state, so you’ve taken a risk I tell you. Who knows what I’ll do next.”

    “My friend is coming over,” Nicholas said then reaching for another cupcake.

    “What does that have to with this situation?”

    Nicholas bit into the delicious chocolate cupcake. “I’m just letting you know someone will worry about me if I go missing.”

    Nalia laughed again, and she pulled out the chair she’d vacated and sat down.

    “I thought you were leaving?”

    Nalia reached for his mug of coffee and made a show of taking a sip. She took one of the cupcakes and made a show of eating it too.

    He frowned.

    “I’m eating too, in case you think I’ve poisoned them. This way, you’re sure your friend will find two bodies.” Nalia swallowed quickly, and sipped his coffee again. “Mmm…these are really good.”

    Nicholas chuckled and wondered what fate had decided. It seemed his risk taking last night had awarded him with a crazy woman who loved chocolate cupcakes.

    What was he going to do with her?

    ***

    The Girl with the Golden Smile – 2

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